Oh boy oh boy, this was beautiful written. You have a knack for creating characters and their so rich in development. It's a little late but congratulation on getting this comic done and props to the people that helped draw the backgrounds on some of the pages.
You did a fantastic job. Great ending. Great Story. Great everything. Thank you for making such a wonderful webcomic.
Also,if you will ever make another nuzlocke,even if not seqel to this...make sure to annouce me.Kay?
i've got loads. kit's nuzlockes, which are all in the same story so they all count as second place. then nix's nuzlocke in second, and some others.
but this? the top. number one, completely. the storyline was amazing, thought out well, and the style was probably one of the simplest, but best ones i've seen so far. linking death with some of the storyline was an amazing thing, something most people could never actually do.
i swear, i will read this over and over.
MY FEELS ARE LIKE ASDFGHFDSFGTFRDAS
I'm be a lying son of a gun if I said I didn't cry.
I saw in the comments you mentioned that's the career you plan to take is in the storytelling business, and that is a fantastic goal, and one you will excel at because you have a true gift for storytelling. This is the only Pokémon comic I have ever gotten so invested in. As the reader you actually CARE about these characters. Just- dang, this was such a good read. Now I need to read Twin Kingdoms. And I look forward to any comic you start after that.
I'm not sure if you've said you're going to or not, but will you ever make a comic to be printed off in physical form? ka-blam.com/printing/front/ That's is a really good site for printing your own comic. u3u I would buy any comic you made available in physical form in an instant. ^^
Hats off to you Rooke