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Kito and Kita by DragonwolfRooke Kito and Kita by DragonwolfRooke
I can't think of a good title for this. Ah well.

EDIT :iconkittenthepsycho: put this to the music! :D [link]

This is for :icongoddess-chachi:'s fanfiction contest...and it's also a look into Kito's backstory, as well. For those of you who don't know, Chachi has a nuzlocke comic, and in it is a Vulpix character named Kita. The two of us thought it was so funny, that we happened to choose such similar names, so we decided to make them brother and sister. I wish I could have shown more of that in the main comic of NuzRooke, but alas, Kito is a bit of a minor character. X'D

Based off of the song Brothers, from Full Metal Alchemist I believe. Here's the song if you'd like to listen and read at the same time. :) [link]

Basically, recap, this is Kito and Kita reminiscing about how things led to where they are now. Kito was always a bit of a player, even though he was the next-to-youngest prince in a family of royal purebreds. His frivolous nature was always a source of conflict between him and his father, King Edmund...especially how Kito would go running off with girls below his status. But he was very close with his little sister Kita.
When he fell in love with Elizabeth the Growlithe, that was the final straw. The fighting got so bad about it between Edmund and Kito, that even Kita tried to sway Kito, angry at him for disgracing their family, and frustrated with him because he was causing so much anger in the family. This led to some bitter arguing between the two siblings, and eventually, Kito left forever, without ever really making up with Kita. He still regrets that.

So in the comic up above, Kito is blaming himself for causing such hardship in the family, as well as for leading his sister astray, in a way. It was his example that later inspired Kita to make the final push to leave home herself, wanting to make her own way, like her big brother did. So even though she's happy, Kito feels kind of bad that she left behind a good home and loving family, and caused their parents a lot of grief too. He feels responsible. Especially with how their mother Natalia got alzheimers and now doesn't remember any of them. It was a bad time to leave.

Kita, of course, made her own decisions, and doesn't blame Kito in the least. But she does sometimes wonder, what might have happened had they both stayed...and she misses her brother and the relationship they had.

So yeah, there you go. That's the way I see it working out. Also, the line about no cure for death - no one dies, fyi. It's just the song lyric, so let's pretend he's talking about the death of his relationship to his family. Burning the bridge and all that.

Hope you like it, Chachi!


Kito (c) me
Kita and others (c) :icongoddess-chachi:
Pokemon (c) Pokemon
Song Lyrics (c) Full Metal Alchemist
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:iconunknownartist2003:
unknownartist2003 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful amg :')
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snowwolf12132 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:')
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transforpuppy Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
Nice
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Intertwined-Destiny Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dear lord this is beautiful
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firem78910 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
say here's a link to that same song www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Als9g…
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:iconcraliedragonwolf:
CralieDragonWolf Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Can I try to draw this comic strip? I'm not usually good with Pokèmon but I would like to try.
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DragonwolfRooke Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
As in, try to re-create it?
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:iconcraliedragonwolf:
CralieDragonWolf Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes
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DragonwolfRooke Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
If you really want to practice drawing Pokemon, I'd recommend maybe mimicking a few of the images, but not the whole comic. Try doing something original. Because getting in the habit of copying the work of others will hinder your progress more than it'll help. Friendly tip. :)
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CralieDragonWolf Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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Pandamoniam13 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
And the music is FMA :3 Edward Elric, um.... I have no idea what I was gonna say to you...
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:iconpandamoniam13:
Pandamoniam13 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
This is beautiful...
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whitetigerfire1 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
is the comic still up if so can u give me the url
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:icondragonwolfrooke:
DragonwolfRooke Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
What do you mean?
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:iconwhitetigerfire1:
whitetigerfire1 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
is there a comic or did you draw this
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:icondragonwolfrooke:
DragonwolfRooke Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
:/ I drew this. It's mine. It's original. I wouldn't have posted it if it weren't mine.

The comic it's referencing, incidentally, is ALSO mine, I ALSO drew it, and you can find it in my gallery under "NuzRooke".
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Nova-Rawr Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Ooo ~

Btw, I have a Pokemon who really likes Kito in my HeartGold-nuzlocke-of-awesome-that-I-need-to-comic-or-something. ;)

He's a guy though. My growlithe, Oli xD
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jwill2820 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013
This story reminds me of my entire childhood, every single word reminds me of what I went through as a kid.
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:iconpinksneasel:
Pinksneasel Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013
I think that after the Nuzlocke is finished, Kito should make like the Protical Son and return home, since his kingdom no longer has any heirs. And I'm sure he'd like to make things up with his father as well, seeing as they never got along. I'm sure Edmond will see that his son HAS changed and matured from his journey, and would make a fine king. Plus, if its like Chachi hinted with Edmond finding a mate for Kita, maybe he had chosen a beautiful babe to be Kito's mate, but never got to introduce them since Kito had fallen for a Growlithe before they could meet. Who knows, maybe Kito might decide that he likes her and can love such a beautiful and down to earth babe, and decide that he should try to make it work after failing in love in the past. 

Also, it works well as he could ALSO give a home to Donny, Lacy, and Ethan. His home is for pure reds only, but as far as we know, all three of them qualify, especially little Ethan since both his parents are the same species. I'd like to think that Kito would like to help the family he helped create live a good life in a safe environment once Rooke leaves to return home. It's the least he can do for his friends.XD
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DragonwolfRooke Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
It's a nice thought, but even if he's changed, Edmond is a tough nut and probably wouldn't take him back anyway. Plus he's got a few other brothers who could be the heirs. And besides, Kita's royal family are Chachi's characters, not mine - Kito just cameos in her story, and Kita in mine. :)
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Pinksneasel Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013
True, but I think that he'd forgive to have one of his children back. And I know his Family is Chachi's idea that you just adapted, but she made it seem like Kita was the only other heir, since she was the princess Edmond was raising for the throne, and why he found a mate for her and was so upset she left. If you intended for Kito and Kita to have more siblings, neither of you have shown that. If if she's doing like real life monarchies, then Kita would only have been the heir if she had no other brothers. You know, kings before queens.

I'm sure if you ask Chachi, she'll allow you to use her idea since you've already implemented it as Kito's backstory. If its canon, I don't see why you can't use it for your story. But it's just an idea, so you can do whatever you decide.XD
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DragonwolfRooke Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
No, no, CHACHI was the one that said they had multiple siblings. At least I think so. It wasn't my idea at least. And as for the monarchy and how it works, ask Chachi. It's possible Kita was chosen to be the heir just because she was the best choice of her siblings. I dunno how Chachi wanted hierarchy to work in the wild Pokemon world.

And since Kito's past has little to no relevance to Rooke the Trainer's story, I don't have much desire to use it. It's Chachi's story, she just let me have a cameo in part of it.
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Pinksneasel Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013
Oh, alright. I just wasn't sure on that. I just thought it'd make a good after story point if Rooke has to leave all of her Pokemon. I'd like to think they got good homes, and it seems like Kito could give them one if he could return home, to be king or not.

On that note, have you decided what will happen to the team when Rooke's journey is finished? It's getting close.
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DragonwolfRooke Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
The story is all finished, don't worry. I wrote it first and then started the comic. So you'll find out what happens to Rooke's team.
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Pinksneasel Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013
Sweet. Can't wait then.XD
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McCheeseburger Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this was so sad thank you for not making anyone die because if you did i would be bursting in tears right now this was amazing
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Geekbending Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Literal tears in my eyes
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GuardianWolf97 Featured By Owner May 11, 2013
Awww! This is sooo good!!! (I love that song too ^^)
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Peaceful-Toxin Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Student General Artist
After both your Nuzlocke comics, you two should make a story out of this!
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glancesherlock Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my, this is so creative. The last two panels are just precious, especially Ethan playing with his Uncle Kito. Too adorable! ^^
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ed665 Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
oh my god!!!!!!!!!!! the vulpix of chachi and yours are brothers?? o_0
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Nanahuatli Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
Heh, I love Bratja. I detested the last third of the anime, but that song is always a bright spot. Is the translation yours? I like the narrative in the panels, but I'm not sure it counts as a fanfiction since the text is borrowed. I love Ampi's cameo and your use of textures.
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leopardears13 Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
Wow, this is amazing. I love the song you chose to go along with it.
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blazeingdark Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
awahh... so sad and beautiful DX

also i couldn't help but sing the song.... :O which reminds me in should send in that vocal track to the con... thanks :D
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MissKittens Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
Done!

[link]
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DragonwolfRooke Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
:D
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pikachubaconisgood Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ISH DAT EFFAN?
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PitchBlackEspresso Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
very deep. very very deep. i love every single panel.
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DrewRaichu Featured By Owner May 8, 2013
Elizabeth...Mine right?
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DragonwolfRooke Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
I dunno.
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DrewRaichu Featured By Owner May 8, 2013
Remember in the stream where I mentioned I had a growlithe named Elizabeth we kinda said koto could have dated her BUT we didn't like finalise that idea
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DragonwolfRooke Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Eh, if it's alright to you, I'd prefer to keep Elizabeth as my own character, just in case I ever do a separate story with Kito's past.
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DrewRaichu Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
That's fine
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jojo72627262 Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Kitos got A Deeper Story Than I Thought. DAYUM
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GardevoirLoverHope Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love that song! xD
Oh my gosh, that's really touching ;w;
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Jenniej92 Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ah so nice :)
i like how you did portrey the emotions!
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Iamrookesfriend Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ampi!
And that's like SUPER sad! Hey, while I was reading this and playing my Black 2 game in the Abundant Shrine, I encountered a male Vulpix, and the next Pokemon I encountered was a female Vulpix and I saw the two on opposite sides O.O
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SaiyaFalcon Featured By Owner May 7, 2013
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:tears:
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LeafiaDream Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This song...it always gets to me.
And seeing two characters that I like so much being so closely related...
I don't really know what to say.
I...don't know what to say...
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Penny-Forest Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dang, Rooke. Dem feels. T3T
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